I am in awe of authors who have mastered the really long sentence and use it to great effect. Not only are such sentences masterpieces of grammar and punctuation (making sure that the reader never gets lost in the constant flow of words), but they often serve one of two functions: like a camera pan instantly orienting the reader in a big, lively scene (see my post on Peréze-Reverte) or encapsulating some key theme of the entire novel in a single, richly textured literary bite.
The latter is found in the opening pages of E.L. Doctorow's new novel, Homer &Langely. It is a wonderful novel about two eccentric, wealthy reclusive brothers who gradually turn inward and become compulsive hoarders within their once wealthy family home in New York City. (The novel is an imaginative, fictional biography of the Collyer brothers.) The opening narration is by Homer, who becomes blind in his late teens. He loses his sight gradually, over months and daily stares out at the same vista of Central Park, measuring the encroaching darkness and shadow. It is a long sentence that begins with the sense of sight and ends with the sense of sound:
"The houses over to Central Park West went first, they got darker as if dissolving into the dark sky until I couldn't make them out, and then the trees began to lose their shape, and finally, this was toward the end of the season, maybe it was late February of that very cold winter, and all I could see were these phantom shapes of the white ice, that last light, went gray and then altogether black, and then all my sight was gone though I could hear clearly the scoot scut of the blades on ice, a very satisfying sound, a soft sound though full of intention, a deeper tone that you'd expect made by the skate blades, perhaps for having sounded the resonant basso of the water under the ice, scoot scut, scoot scut."
This early in the novel I am trapped by that image -- the fading of sight, the reliance of knowing the world in a more limited way. I can anticipate all the other concerns of the novel: memory and nostalgia as the brothers' world like Homer's fading sight closes in on them, and their increasing eccentricities create an alternate world out of hoarded trash. Not even on page two and I am already neck deep in the brother's peculiar lives. I'll be posting a longer review of the novel next week -- a group of us are getting together to talk about it over a meal. (The photograph above is the police trying to gain entrance to the NY apartment in 1947, Credit: Anthony Camerano / Associated Press)
In the meantime, anybody have an other favorites? (I can list a bunch from Julio Cortazar's brilliant one sentence, one paragraph story "No One is to Blame" to Joseph Conrad's opening sentence in his novel An Outcast of the Islandsand half a dozen such potent lines in Cormac McCarthy's novels.